Reinvent Fairy Tale

I decided to take the fairy tell that we all know and love “Jack and Jill” and give it a space world and comedy twist. So here is how I would put this whole story into my Sci-Fi fairy tale story.
It was the year 2050 and Jack was sitting in his space home watching a little asteroid war fare, that normally happens everyday outside his window; when he realized his stomach was growling at him so he got up and went to his space kitchen grab some Frosty Shooting Star Balls, and when he went to grab for the milk re realized that he has ran out of milk. So he went to his sister Jill and told her that they have run out of milk she said, “well you better get in your Galy Car and fetch us some milk from the milky way” Jack replied, “we always go together to fetch our pail of milk you must come with me”. So Jill got up angered at first, grab jack and went to their Galy Car and spun out into space heading towards the Milky Way to get their milk that Jack needed so bad for his star ball cereal. When they arrived at the Milky Way Jill told jack to fetch the milk that he needed so bad but he refused to go inside and get it unless she came with him. So Jill parked the Galy Car and moon-jumped into the store with Jack. They grab the milk that they needed and paid for it and proceeded to leave the store when all of a sudden Jack tripped on his oversize coat that he was wearing broke his nose in the process and Jill came jumping after him and rushed him to the infirmary. So in the end Jack never got to eat his Frosty Shooting Star Ball cereal.