Home Sweet Home Lab 5

Home Sweet Home

“Ah, get it out, get it out. Remove this awful pain from my body”, screamed Angela as she was pushed into the ER.

Angela was a small town girl who lived in Alabama; she has a real strong country accent, blond hair that could touch the sky if you held it up in the air, she is tall and slender, and most important she has a very close-knit family and she is nine months pregnant. Her fiancé Bobby just got out of jail for the third time and more than likely will see those sell blocks a fourth time. Bobby has dark hair and has his body almost covered in tattoos. Her mamma and daddy are divorced but still remain in contact with one another. The whole family comes over to Mama’s House for Sunday night dinner; there hasn’t been one Sunday night dinner that the family has missed except for this night.
Angela grabbed Bobby’s hand and squeezed it so hard that he almost bleed internally. “Bobby, you make them take this thang out; you make them take it out now.” “Cricket I will do everything I can ok don’t you worry; Mamma and Daddy are taking care of everything.” Bobby was right Mamma and Daddy were taking care of everything they were yelling at everyone in the hospital. From the nurses, to the doctors, even to some of the other patients. They had to be escorted outside to take a breather.

Entering the house Angela jumped up on Bobby and kissed him all over; Bobby knew what she wanted to do. Bobby brought her into their room, closing the door with his foot, and slammed her on the bed. Angela ripped off Bobby’s clothes and she ripped hers as well.
“Oh Bobby I love you”
“I love you too Cricket”
“Cricket?”
“Yes Bobby.”
“Cricket I wanna have a house with you and have little Bobbies and Angies running around the house”
“Oh Bobby me too, me too. Lets make baby one right now; Fuck me Bobby”
“Oh Cricket you make me chirp in the night sky. Your mine all mine tonight”
That night Bobby and Angela made love to one another all through the night and in till morning. Now Bobby and Angela live with Angela’s parents they don’t quite live on their own, but they want to start and have a family of their own. Two seconds later after the last episode of creating little Bobby. Mamma yells do you want scrambled or over easy on your eggs loves. At the same time they both said over easy Mamma. “They be ready for ya’ll in about two minutes; so get your butts up and say hello to the morning”

“Where’s Mamma? I need Mamma. Daddy you go and get Mamma.”
“Yes dear.”
When Mamma entered the door Angela just went haywire. Screaming and kicking like no other. The Nurse came in and had to plant Angela to the bed so she couldn’t move. But Mamma went up to Angela very calm and simply asked her if there was anything that she could get for her, if she needed anything. All Angela wanted was to get this baby out of her. She never thought it would hurt this bad. She swore to Bobby that this was it no more after this one. Everything in the hospital was happening so fast just a little to fast. It was time, time for the little Bobby to come out from his Mamma’s belly. Soon Angela was gonna be called mamma and Bobby would be called Daddy. Were they ready for this? There was no time to think it just happened. By the end Bobby’s hand was purple and blue and the rest of the family were crying hysterically. It was official Bobby and Angela were now proud parents and Mamma and Daddy were now proud grandparents. It was now time for the two families to start their own separate lives but this family would stick together forever.





The only thing I think you need to do is to work on the tenses. The tenses are not fluent throughtout your story. Beside that I think it’s okay.